Takže nedávno jsem sem vložila svůj sloh na anglickou konverzaci. :-) Možná by Vás mohlo zajímat, jakt to dopadlo. Takže dostala jsem dvě mínus a pochvalu za pěkně napsaný sloh, vyčteny mi byly drobné chyby. :)
Kdybyste chtěli vidět, co jsou ty "drobné chyby" zač, mrkněte se:
I've got family like everybody. And (like everybody) sometimes we disagree about our ideas... Basically my family is quite average, so I don't know, what I can write about my family members.
My parents have a middle-sized house in a village near Nachod. It's ordinary house about one floor and garden with a small swimming pool. So me, my mother, father and my two brothers live there and all the time it's the same.
My mom has a dog - his name is Dustin - and we all have three cats - Angela, Zlaťák (Double eagle in English x))) and Sněhurka (Snowwhite in English). My older brother has some fish in an aquarium now, it's so crazy - he is twenty years old and he has fish! Ok, it's not funny.
Well, my older brother will be exactly twenty years old in may. His name is Dominik and he studies middle school, next year he is going to graduate.
I' ve got a younger brother too, his name is Mikuláš and he studies at the primary school - mathematical class, he is ileven years old. He´s going to study at the same grammar school as me... probably.
My father is an engineer and he works in Hedva. He is so clever! I want to be so clever as he... sometime in future. He goes to work to Moravia, for that reason he is at home only at the weekend.
My mother is seller in Skalican - it's in Nachod. She is very industrious, but she wants us to help her. It's difficult and not interesting. Housework is boring.
We have many relatives in other place in Europe. In Czech republic, Slovakia, Hungary, Rumania, Ukraine, Russia and so one. Unfortunately we don't visit these people, so I don't know them.
So that´s all about my family, I think, It's not interesting reading.
Profesor nám slohy předčítal před celou třídou) a zároveň je opravoval, já jsem si to v počítači opravila červenou a po pravdě, úplně mě dostalo, jak je to celé červené. některé chyby byly absolutně pitomé, třeba ty členy nebo napsat this people místo these. :( Kdybych se na to pořádně podívala, tak by to mohlo dopadnout lépe, ale co se dá dělat... Porovnejte to s originálem: My family